27 Mar 2005, 9:25pm
Writing
by David

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Resections(II);
Temple Lawn Dwelling

Classic pruning. Told the excess to wait in the storm drain.
Told the iris to fragment and the willow to rout.
Told the prevailing storms to get out.
Told the hours      swaying in the tulip poplar
to stop dropping blooms on the lawn.
(Told the tree again, I really do think it’s time to move on.)

I motioned and I gestured, I pointed and I prodded, I sat me down;
it sadly mattered. Spring
                                                 overwhelmed.

I only wanted
a crush that dripped
the fat of a leaf-bud
that dripped
                                             at two o’clock                            approximately
                                             from the tree
                                             a color descended
                                             into or out of the clouds        you could not say
                                                                                                 where it came from

                                             and the sky put on;
                                             a green dress
                                             its emerald dress

and the eyes accepted
the yellow and thick-dangled
thick accepting
flowers.
                                             –all the contrast
                                             myself,

wisteria, a purple figure      fugue
over the church and the neighbor’s

26 Mar 2005, 9:27pm
Writing
by David

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Resections(III);
My Past Your Past a Black-Eyed Susan

Juniper: choose.
I’m off to sleep. I’m without you. (I’m alone)
You’re a ghost. You’re a sibling. You’re a divinity.

(And even the moss grass weight of this can’t take me that way)

How old are you now? I’m not seven, I’m eighty, and I don’t remember it.
Every day is a bottle. I find flowers in the yard and a tire-swing,
children at the head of the stairs. The room to the right is Grandmother’s.
You don’t go in by yourself. The edges will hurt you

sewing needle      broken glass      books       heavy table wardrobe
in the corner      one window      to the right     more books

If this spider spells you you’ll die.
You’re under the highbeams. You’re lighting a match.

                                                      *

The whippoorwill
in the oak             makes Hoo the same sound
as the owl      in the gully             at a point      when you burn it
the privet screams         one syllable      can infect you
with poisonous smoke
the Plymouth     killed the roses
Grandfather said

Before I feed him there is a bad man under the table. Shame
on me.

                                                      *

You know, I can, recite books
lovely
                                                      I know, you can

Genesis Exodus Leviticus                     Numbers
                            Ruth
we all fall down

                    Zechariah Malachi Haggai

First and Second Samuel              First and Second Kings
First and Second Chronicles

                                                  on our choices

                                Ezra
                             Nehemiah
                                  Esther
                                  Job
but can we
                                                       pray?

                               Psalms
                               Proverbs

                                       (I loved watching you come here)

                      Ecclesiastes

                                                      *

Juniper outside the window Bobby came
to check on me He said I didn’t look good He put
some flowers on me not the cheap plastic but real ones
Next year he said he’d bring his notebook and draw again

I think of you now
Which way did you go

after we touched?
Why don’t you                                                     come?

24 Mar 2005, 7:25pm
Writing
by David

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“birthstone”

(or “Alice”)

A mood in the rocks.
Sometimes. They go plunking out
within the skippers and the hoppers,
the big monoliths and the gritty pebbles,
songs like old sighs. Sometimes
we can change. But don’t
go into the boat. Each smile is a challenge,
every film a long trailer.
Stay that song. Its wake
more than a parting shot, midnight a fat jewel,
red and ordinary, honest
amethyst, trepanum, brain grey-matter,
Queen Jade. Stay that song. Who can
go on without sorrow?

21 Mar 2005, 7:36pm
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by David

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“drift”

far/as a seaside\village
this one is not bad
at all/ there’s a balcony \and free cable
(pull over)
‘rent’ sign         LOTTO              (look)
everywhere
heated pool | sand |
peephole | and ice-machine
                                                    (manners)
[sic]            People
                                     (stir)
click-click and
thrum of electric
motor (hrrrrnnn)
keeping you
and keeping you
hard/this is good                      now

we will check in/
out of this grey
mess\ we’ve driven through
(3000 miles | or so)
man answers to Mr. West
ask him/ I’ll speak to someone
about the car/ buy
a new shirt/ flag
on the moon

21 Mar 2005, 2:32pm
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Hi, my name’s Bob, I like spanking

Looking… Looking…There’s a Dobyns interview somewhere on the net, in which he talks about his love of music, and in particular how music (or listening to music) has influenced or stimulated his work.

This isn’t it:

http://www.alsopreview.com/aside/dobyns.html

Although it does remind me, there is a lot of good stuff out there, a lot of it with his name attached. Mike called him the thinking man’s Billy Collins, or something to that effect. Probably not a bad analogy.

At least, the things he thinks about, I also think about.